[[ This one is more poem than song, I suppose. I tried to make each line a separate image or idea that could stand on its own. For example, "a box of familiar" and "remains to remember" could be two things, perhaps two ways to describe a dead person's ashes. Words do double duty. ]]
when smoke curls to
and clouds burst.
remains to remember
A box of familiar
words on a shelf:
we'll be together
when ash is dust,
when smoke curls to
high rolling clouds
(how heavy are they?
let's look it up)
and clouds burst.
When stone smooths
away in the wind,
when ivy obscures,
away in the wind,
when ivy obscures,
when nobody here
remains to remember
we were, what endures
weighs as much as
a black locomotive
burning in the sun.
a black locomotive
burning in the sun.
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