Showing posts with label train. Show all posts
Showing posts with label train. Show all posts

Thursday, 25 July 2019

intentional love song 19: this is how you fall in love


[[ This could be a silly little old-fashioned song with some flighty young thing dodging the advances of a Maurice Chevalier type, or it could be a thing of menace with an awful creeper pushing himself on her. Or both. Is she feeling safe and free to choose? Or is she actually in a scary spot and feeling like she has no choice? And play with the genders to get interesting results: she's a he and he's a she, or two women, or two men. ]]


oh, look at the time
oh, how it's getting late
oh, here comes my train 
oh, get me out of here, out of here,
oh, here comes my fate

this is where a girl should be careful
what was I thinking of?
this is where a boy could be a handful
this is how you fall in love

oh, look at the time
oh, how it's getting late
oh, there goes my train 
oh, get me out of here, out of here,
oh, here comes my fate

this is where a girl should be careful
what was I thinking of?
this is where a boy could be more than a handful
this is how you fall in love

this is where a girl should be careful
this is where a girl should be coy
this is where a girl should be forceful
this is where a girl should be
this is where a girl should be
this is where a girl should be
this is how you fall in love 


Tuesday, 28 May 2019

Imagined Geography 5: Vienna Song


this is Vienna
beneath this dome
under the car park
this is my home

hopping the turnstiles
dodging the landlord
looking for something
hidden here before

under Vienna
city in ruins
city of ghosts
all up in smoke

you take the fast train
nightime from Linz
something seen once
never seen since

not since Vienna




Sunday, 17 March 2019

intentional love song 16: everything runs down, everything runs away



[[ from a photo of Appalachia in the paper ]]

everything runs away
down this valley
everything runs away

the railway follows on one side
the highway holds to the other
the river flows in between them
down to the sea

everything runs down,
everything runs away
everything runs down, runs
down to the sea

there's even a mist on the river
who put that mist in the air?
as if someone drew it that way
knew I would need to go
knew I would need to stay

I could take a photograph of you
steal a photograph of you away
I could take a photograph of you
maybe give it back another day

I know there is nothing up above us
but a sky full of chance and blame
I know there is nothing up above us
but people like to give chance a name

Don't say you're going to turn it round
and make it like it was back then
Might as well pull all those trains back up the hill
and push that river back up the valley again

everything runs down,
everything runs away
everything runs down, runs
down to the sea

Monday, 31 December 2018

intentional love song 6: bird at night


[[ moving old props around the stage ]]


what's the bird that sings at night?
poems rhyme about nightingales
but it's winter here and cold
and I don't think we have nightingales
in our trees

so what's the bird that sang just now?
now the cars have all gone
and the trains have shut down
and everyone else has drifted away
in the freeze?

every song has a moon
when you're up all night and lonely

every song has a moon and stars
when your days are right

all my songs have only you
and we're all alone

think I'll go out to hear that bird
if that bird hasn't flown away 
don't lock the door behind me
I'm just going to see what I hear
I won't take the keys


Friday, 16 November 2018

Bob


[[ I was reading the obituaries and listening to songs. Suddenly, Bob and Elvis. ]] 

I saw your face 
while I was listening 
to mystery train.

Why sixteen coaches?
Sixteen's always 
the lecher's number.

Why long black train?
Long and black are always
porn specifications.

This is the nonsense
I'd have told you
but you were dead.

Are dead. Be dead. 
Or not be dead. Ride 
the mystery train.

Saturday, 24 February 2018

third rail talking

when you walk
underground
electric train
roars by so loud

your soft flesh  
and bones frail

when you walk
that dark tunnel
you cannot walk 
without peril

you will touch
the third rail

then it's the
third rail talking
it's the
third rail talking
from your mouth
third rail talking

touch the third rail
and the third rail
will loosen 
your tongue
will loosen 
all your tongues

that face 
you see in the dark?
swimming up 
out of the dark?

that voice 
you hear in the dark?

it's the
third rail talking
it's the
third rail talking
from your mouth
third rail talking

touch the third rail
and the third rail
will loosen 
your tongue
will loosen 
all your tongues

Wednesday, 13 September 2017

I took a train

A1.
I took a train (she took a train)
because I could not stand a plane
(she took a train) I took a train
because I just refuse to use an automobile.

A2.
I took a train (she took a train)
the time and place, I am not sayin'
(she took a train) I took a train
I think I dreamed through Mississippi with Lucille.

A3.
I took a train (she took a train)
I do not think it has a name
(she took a train) I took a train
I cannot say this train is actually really real.

B1.
I took a train (she took a train)
To see America once again
To see America
eye to eye
one more day

C1.
There's no conductor on the train
No sacks of mail, just pouring rain
Washing the outside world away

C2.
How far we'll go, I could not say
This train is burning yesterday
This train is burning yesterday

B2.
Get a drink at the bar
And from the observation car
I see America
city by city
fade away

I see America
city by city [town by town, field by field, depending on how many times we've sung this thing]
fade away

etc.

[[

I hope the song works regardless of anything you know beforehand, but the plan is:

1. It's a train song, but a train on no real line. Lucille is and isn't B.B. King's guitar. This train got the disappeared railroad blues, which is why it's got no conductors or mail, and it's burning yesterday.

2. Maybe "he" or "she" makes little difference to the song (except for slight possible implications about Lucille), but it might be interesting to think of Gladys Knight (and the Pips singing "she...") in a duet with... Willie Nelson? Ha! Midnight Train to New Orleans. Or maybe this should be a Bonnie Raitt song.

2. The Pips are parenthetical (woo! woo!), as in https://genius.com/Gladys-knight-and-the-pips-midnight-train-to-georgia-lyrics  

This is not a script for a video, but if it were, imagine we picked up Willie and friends along the way, let him sing his piece (Cx) with or without Gladys as we take the train through middle America, drop him off, and then let Gladys and Co. have that drink (B2) as the train heads into the sunset and for the coast.

I don't know whether she's leaving America behind or America itself is fading away or both or whether it's all a simple bottle of nostalgia and silliness. If it was a video, they would be at the back of a train heading west, in an ornate observation car watching the setting sun shine on America before it heads over the Pacific... ]]